Its the scan line things.

Meant to be a gift like the previous one.

i like this one, right side seems too bright though

Ty, maybe. It seems normal to me but i think i've just seen too many bright tags.

Only slightly bright to me.

I think the right side looks fine.
I want more depth from this tag.

u lookin mighty fine, johnbby

Not too sure if the white smudging was a great addition, but i liked it lol.

Colors dont blend.
Lighting kinda weird.
All smudge cept the White is kinda weird.
Overall its kinda weird.
But somehow I like it.

What might help is that if you are going to incorporate the white, try to incorporate it into more area's of the tag so that it doesn't feel out of place among everything else.
Everything is really dark except the white and the render, which makes it not fit together.