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Apr 27 2014 01:41pm
I'll try some of those soon. Result of this one:

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Post what tuts you follow with the tags :)
E and that one seems lq again, and the compo is boring

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Apr 29 2014 10:44pm
really gotta go easy on that sharpen filter! its cutting your quality in half
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Apr 30 2014 09:04am
Yeah, now that I look at it, too much sharpen <_<
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Quote (Resistance @ May 4 2014 03:21am)
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t240/The-Resistance/ACsig2p_zps8a0a8437.png


Need a bit of work with your text placement/font choice. It draws the eye away from the focal bercause its so dark and out of place.
The background needs to be smudged or worked somehow and the c4ds youve dumped on top look silly. Work them in with the lighting on your render or lighten areas around them.. ie, his back has the c4d there but there is a shadow there so it doesnt fit.
Most of your tags need lighting work too, the renders have areas which are already lightened, use them when setting your light source (it should be to the left slightly to make the lighting on him make sense)
Keep following tutorials and download some .psd's and have a look through the layers at how they build up and add light etc
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Quote (Resistance @ Apr 29 2014 11:01pm)
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t240/The-Resistance/megapixelsigj_zpsc0ab3b39.jpg


font is wack but the concept is good, like others said theres some quality issues and def over sharp
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Quote (Resistance @ May 3 2014 01:21pm)
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t240/The-Resistance/ACsig2p_zps8a0a8437.png


decent compo and concept, biggest issue seems to be a lack of direction, a lot of extra effects placed at random
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