That looks pretty nice to me man, not really sure but there seems to be some big blocky object on the right that's a bit distracting, on my phone though so idk what it is
And some floral looking design at the bottom right looks sorta were maybe but again ism what it is lol
E; erase the ugly effects left over the render, it looks weird

This post was edited by Arcaeus on Sep 14 2013 11:13am

Yay, a first positive comment ^^ Do you mean the left side of the woman or the sig? Cuz I kinda liked that part It's a c4d on Overlay with some ctrl + U.

I'm not completely sure but I think he may mean whatever is on top of the render specifically. I may be wrong though.

Her left arm from her perspective, the right side of her from your perspective.
It looks like sores or bruises, in my opinion.

I don't mind some of the overlay that's visible on her clothing, though.

Good job on the latest.

Thanks I will make minor adjustments on her.

Just playing around with textures and stuff ^^



damn that left bottom thing is distracting <.< why do I notice these things when I press preview post and not before? O.o

Made it a bit bigger, since I find 400x150 a bit small... just a bit ^^ No textures this time, tried some effects and c4d renders.

This one isn't so bad



This one however....

I like it too :3

oh lol just experimenting, trying to find my style If it won't take you too long, just point out a few biggest mistakes.

It's just really messy. Also, you have a habit it seems of having a lot of junk on top of the render/focal and sometimes it kind-of makes it look cluttered or trashy. Just my opinion idk;

the pink one isnt bad.
I would stray away from white lightsources unless its for something specific.
Try working on lighting, shadows, depth, and general composition.
Also, Remember to keep quality up!