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Mar 21 2013 05:23pm
2 by far, but fix the kerning on the 'A V' and the 'L T'
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Mar 21 2013 05:35pm
updated kerning and some spacing

fonts used:

Name + school: Century
Title: Franchise
dates: Lucida Grande


not sure if I like the lucida font.... bleh need halp

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Mar 21 2013 05:48pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Mar 21 2013 07:35pm)
updated kerning and some spacing

fonts used:

Name + school: Century
Title: Franchise
dates: Lucida Grande


not sure if I like the lucida font.... bleh need halp

http://i.imgur.com/CCe4xAP.jpg


some good shit
watch the values on University and Thompson
the colours sorta bleed into the background
otherwise i leik

add some bleeds on the mofo though. i cringe every time i see white borders on good posters.
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Mar 21 2013 05:52pm
Quote (TheShattered @ Mar 21 2013 05:48pm)
some good shit
watch the values on University and Thompson
the colours sorta bleed into the background
otherwise i leik

add some bleeds on the mofo though. i cringe every time i see white borders on good posters.


ya I noticed the value thing from the beginning, but not sure how to go about fixing it? the color/value is eyedropped from my ear lol
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Mar 21 2013 06:05pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Mar 21 2013 07:52pm)
ya I noticed the value thing from the beginning, but not sure how to go about fixing it? the color/value is eyedropped from my ear lol


give it a slight drop shadow or make it bold. usually helps font stick out.

*EDIT* Also your 'AN' are too close together now, other than that much better!

This post was edited by Tetu_880 on Mar 21 2013 06:06pm
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Mar 21 2013 06:18pm
updated the AN and lmk if the orange text is easier to read


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Mar 21 2013 06:33pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Mar 21 2013 08:18pm)
updated the AN and lmk if the orange text is easier to read


http://i.imgur.com/hpXrxC3.jpg


this is starting to look polished.
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Mar 21 2013 06:38pm
Quote (FloraFreak @ Mar 21 2013 06:33pm)
this is starting to look polished.


more cnc!

what do you guys think about the dates typog?
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Mar 21 2013 08:52pm
ahhhh shiii, forgot to put in " talley Gallery "

where should that go.... under bemidji state?
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Mar 22 2013 07:30am
the 'y' in university and the 's' in thompson are still hard to read, but the rest seems a little better. You could also do a faint gradient, transparent to black, on the bottom of the poster to bring out the font. Very faint though, just enough to darken the bottom of the picture so the orange has enough contrast over the light blue. That or use a thicker font/different shade of orange.
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