you escalated the conflict, your the one to talk. this what happens when you jump into things that you aren't responsible for.

if you don't know where your getting at on a sig that generally means stop and come back to it later, or start a new.
to chaotic, no flow, floating head, to many lighting source doesn't match at all, and monotone. quit slapping shit together hoping for a nice comment. your not learning anything.
quit making nova lines and star stocks if you are not going to use them right if you plan to make it your signature style.

and for the last time review some tutorials.

This post was edited by Irresistable on Jun 29 2012 01:09pm

render was a floating head so guess i picked a bad render lol, theres only one big light source on its head so i dont know what you mean by that i agree with the monotone part to, chaotic is just a part of a style even if you didnt like it someone else might like chaotic.

This post was edited by Golden_star on Jun 29 2012 01:17pm

bottom right lighting is off. looking at the shadow on the right of the renders face.
its best to always work with renders/stocks that shows flow.

monotone
bad flow
floating head
bad border
chaotic
no real focal
no depth



try a new tut

This post was edited by UncleMuscles on Jun 29 2012 02:35pm

anyone show me how a good border looks like?

No such thing unless ironic 50px black border.

I think some borders can look nice, depends on the piece

- Tried to fix some problems.

that piece is not going nowhere move on.

Way ahead of you friend - no tuts or anything used for this one just my personal smudge settings etc, also lines are made by me not a stock.

This post was edited by Golden_star on Jun 29 2012 04:09pm