Signature Design Class - Week 2 - Topic

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Sep 6 2011 09:55am

Quote (iReapZz @ Sep 6 2011 02:05am)

How I do?
http://i475.photobucket.com/albums/rr117/Death069/Awesomesauce.png

I think I over did the brushes :/
I tried though.. This tut was tough cuz my textures/c4ds collection is pretty bad :/

in addition to what odin said, the brushing on the left is a little obvious and random, i'd try to use a legitimate texture there instead

Quote (antal14domina @ Sep 6 2011 05:39am)

Mmh think i failed here... whats your opinion?

I like it anyways so its kinda weird xD
Tut resources and render were 10/10 :thumbsup:

http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb444/Antal14/Tutorial.png

compared to the tut its got a bad render to canvas size ratio, i mean you only put the head (AKA floating head) which is quite bad
the typo is much weaker in your result than the tutorial as well, the effects are a bit chaotic in a bad way
i suggest you try this again with a closer canvas size to the tutorial and have the render in there bigger

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Sep 6 2011 10:10am

its been said a million times, follow the tutorials exactly..
that includes canvas size
Stop trying to rush this, you have an entire week.

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Sep 6 2011 12:44pm

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Sep 6 2011 01:01pm

Quote (AF_Mitch_07 @ Sep 6 2011 02:44pm)

http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa185/AF_Mitch_07/Futuristic.jpg

Quote (DB_odin @ Sep 6 2011 01:23am)

i decided to try out the tut, it should be do-able.
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/7702/tutorial1sk.png
this is really more of magi's area, since all the textures, but its fairly close.

heres some more textureness for you. it always feels like.. wrong to edit your tags because my style is so different lol

This post was edited by TheReborn_Magi on Sep 6 2011 01:07pm

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Sep 6 2011 02:09pm

BLUEEEEEEEEEEPIIIIIIIIIIIIIINK.

Did'nt reali read it tho..

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Sep 6 2011 02:20pm

Can someone possibly give me some sharpening tips? It seems like I always over sharpen, or it'll come out blurry.

/e I think it needs more dark colors around the edges.

This post was edited by Ayudame on Sep 6 2011 02:27pm

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Sep 6 2011 02:53pm

Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Sep 6 2011 02:01pm)

tooooo briiiiiiight

you really need to tone it down, the contrast is insane, part of why the tut tag pops is the light and dark comparisons, this is just bright all over
some of the effects are a bit random as well, i like the red c4d i think, but without the change to the brightness its hard to say exactly what to do

e/ if you made your current i like it a lot

heres some more textureness for you. it always feels like.. wrong to edit your tags because my style is so different lol
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j100/AkatoshDive/tutorialweek2clab.png

agh well alright, i guess the smart sharpen made it a little too crazy. heres just a plain sharpen.

Smart Sharpen

Sharpen

This post was edited by AF_Mitch_07 on Sep 6 2011 02:54pm

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Sep 6 2011 02:57pm

Quote (Ayudame @ Sep 6 2011 12:20pm)

http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/517/week2.jpg

Can someone possibly give me some sharpening tips? It seems like I always over sharpen, or it'll come out blurry.

/e I think it needs more dark colors around the edges.

sharpen filter, lower opacity to 30-50%, erase parts that are oversharpened

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Sep 6 2011 03:01pm

Quote (AF_Mitch_07 @ Sep 6 2011 04:53pm)

agh well alright, i guess the smart sharpen made it a little too crazy. heres just a plain sharpen.

http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa185/AF_Mitch_07/Futuristic.jpg Smart Sharpen
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa185/AF_Mitch_07/Futuristic2.jpg Sharpen

that sharpness is better, but you still need to go back and work on the brightness/contrast issues

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Sep 6 2011 03:05pm

Quote (nerobellum @ Sep 6 2011 04:57pm)

sharpen filter, lower opacity to 30-50%, erase parts that are oversharpened

Thanks worked really well.

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