Quote (Flips1de @ Sep 1 2010 09:16pm)
that's great. we're pointing out something that is wrong with the piece.
what does that have to do with these forums?
you should probably go back to the diablo 2 section. i think you're lost.
see, this is the GRAPHIC DESIGN forum.
shut up and calm down.
Quote (emuu @ Sep 1 2010 09:16pm)
like i've said before, i think you should go back a few steps and learn the basics. i'm only saying this to help you.
the perspective is totally off. it looks a bit surreal, the far end of the beach is heading off vertically at a weird angle.
the composition is pretty flat and unsatisfying. it lacks detail and a spicy focal (or two..).
the colours are rather dull (tho not bad), expand your palette.
use references when you're stuck, realism.
ps. large brushes.
lolwut
about 4-5 people have said this in every single one of his topics. we've even given him advice, and he just disregards all posts that aren't like this:
Quote (TheShattered @ Sep 1 2010 08:01pm)
son
that's some good shiet. I'd make love to it
only thing bothering me is the distant mountain's shape, and the sun there
seems too dim
Imo you can continue adding bit more highlights on the palm trees at the front, would look sexy
ya'll getting quite good
oh and practice clouds
the brush strokes shouldn't really be visible on a cloud