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I blame school.

but to tell you the truth i'm planning on cardiology for my career LOL
go on, laugh.


I guess thats smart of you, hopefully youll still have time to paint though.

I can just see you selling paintings out of your garage on the side xD
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Feb 14 2011 11:17pm
still waiting for my gift.
oh so waiting.
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Hmm.. don't know.. I like it but i feel like its missing alot of details.. These clouds and mountains aren't so impressive than the previous you have done. But its still awesome for a request.
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love this bro o_o

the only thing that kinda bugs me is the " neon-ness " of that green :O and the fact that the leaves are so bushy that you cant see through some parts

nawmean brothaman?

other than that.

such an amazing concept :O

e/ oh and the pink tone mountain throws me off bad

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gohan? :unsure:
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Tree branches are never thinner at trunk and thicker in the upper part, tree wouldn't be able to support its own weight and it would break off (major issue is not the possibility, but it looks weird). Reflections on lower part of the trunk also seem too strong, since it's reflective/global light -judging from the angle of the sun rays, in any case it wouldn't be that bright. Since the major focal of this piece would be the boy and the apple, you could somehow try and force the eye of observer to pay attention to the apple, and a bit less to the branches and leaves. I kinda like the transition from left to right, although the picture is unbalanced (lots of stuff going on on right, many diff colors and objects, while left is rather bland and boring). You got much more awesomeness in you, bring it out!
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Tree branches are never thinner at trunk and thicker in the upper part, tree wouldn't be able to support its own weight and it would break off (major issue is not the possibility, but it looks weird). Reflections on lower part of the trunk also seem too strong, since it's reflective/global light -judging from the angle of the sun rays, in any case it wouldn't be that bright. Since the major focal of this piece would be the boy and the apple, you could somehow try and force the eye of observer to pay attention to the apple, and a bit less to the branches and leaves. I kinda like the transition from left to right, although the picture is unbalanced (lots of stuff going on on right, many diff colors and objects, while left is rather bland and boring). You got much more awesomeness in you, bring it out!


you're right, but i've been doing nothing but trad work lately :(
needa clean up the rust forming on my hands
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you're right, but i've been doing nothing but trad work lately :(
needa clean up the rust forming on my hands


i got update on our collab, bitch i forgot and i didn't send, gimmeh a sec :p

E: might give you the push you need!

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