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Dec 10 2012 11:13pm


added a bit of depth with all the layers i already had.
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Dec 11 2012 06:13am
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Dec 11 2012 04:13pm)
http://i1302.photobucket.com/albums/ag139/Lwe12345/Yeahspaceman3.png

added a bit of depth with all the layers i already had.


Smudging has it's place...I don't think this is the place.
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Dec 11 2012 07:39am
Quote (sicklad @ Dec 11 2012 08:13am)
Smudging has it's place...I don't think this is the place.


yeah yeah yeah
I tried a pretty weird concept
I see what you mean, it might've been a better signature if I used c4ds and depth rather than smudge
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Dec 11 2012 02:37pm
cool concept
like v1 best
would rather have more colour, not a fan of white light
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Dec 11 2012 10:04pm
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Dec 12 2012 04:24pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Dec 12 2012 12:04am)
http://i1302.photobucket.com/albums/ag139/Lwe12345/Fable2point5.png


mmmm?
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Dec 12 2012 05:41pm
dont like it
scrap it
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Dec 12 2012 06:09pm
Quote (killkillkillkil @ Dec 12 2012 07:41pm)
dont like it
scrap it



that's it?



Anyone else have anything to add
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Dec 12 2012 09:49pm
its all over the place, instead of just one focal point you have a dozen, Blur to create depth hasn't worked here, its just making the design more confusing. sorry
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Dec 12 2012 10:59pm
Quote (TheArtist @ Dec 12 2012 11:49pm)
its all over the place, instead of just one focal point you have a dozen, Blur to create depth hasn't worked here, its just making the design more confusing. sorry


It's alright, this helps
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