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Dec 9 2012 07:58pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Dec 9 2012 09:54pm)
http://i1302.photobucket.com/albums/ag139/Lwe12345/Spaceman2.png


interadestering

maybe switch up colour, really blande right now
and lighting isn't really consistent throughout tag, but that's minor
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Quote (TheShattered @ Dec 9 2012 09:58pm)
interadestering

maybe switch up colour, really  blande right now
and lighting isn't really consistent throughout tag, but that's minor


thanks! I feel like the depth/foreground is a bit off as well.
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Dec 9 2012 10:42pm


just did this
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Dec 9 2012 10:55pm
you should use more smudge layers to create depth/ light and dark instead of blurring
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Quote (killkillkillkil @ Dec 10 2012 12:55am)
you should use more smudge layers to create depth/ light and dark instead of blurring


this is something im working on, still trying to get the hang of it

currently i have two for each little strand of bright blue, one dark one bright on color dodge
then I have an original layer with the darker color, and then I added a smudge layer with the darkest color on the very outside
the smudge makes up about 30 layers total, the psd about 50
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Dec 10 2012 12:06am
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Dec 10 2012 12:42am)
http://i1302.photobucket.com/albums/ag139/Lwe12345/DeadspaceSmudge2.png

just did this
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whipped up some typo...
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Dec 10 2012 02:14am
I like the last one a lot. Without text though.
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Dec 10 2012 05:16am
Quote (LindeRKV @ Dec 10 2012 03:14am)
I like the last one a lot. Without text though.


me too :)
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Dec 10 2012 09:17pm


not sure how i feel about it. I hate it but I love it?

This post was edited by Lwe12345 on Dec 10 2012 09:24pm
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