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Oct 13 2011 07:45am
Quote (D@n.Gr33k @ 13 Oct 2011 15:17)
the thing into the right is distracting and the smude at her shoulder isnt very good..
text is okay but it needs smthing


those c4d's are disturbing the flow.
The lights doesnt fit everywhere (always look @ the render and see where the lightsource has to come from)
I also think that render position isnt well choiced, i'd keep it bigger.
You need to use more layers of filters or sth. to create a better color harmony.
last: i'd try to use more then just "2 Layer" (not meaning the amount of layers from your psd). The concept would be better if you'd use Background (your smudging stuff) middle Part (the focal) and a foreground (example some more smudging) i think this would create a better dynamic.
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Oct 17 2011 11:42am
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Oct 17 2011 11:56am
Quote (TzL @ Oct 17 2011 01:42pm)
http://www.glamdring.se/users/1a72dd92186fe96d8e64efefff32accc/Rrainbbb.png


thats pretty neat looking imo, but you shoulda erased that thing going off him on the left
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Oct 17 2011 12:59pm
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Oct 17 2011 07:56pm)
thats pretty neat looking imo, but you shoulda erased that thing going off him on the left


Yea. I might do, or just smudge it over.
Thx <3
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Oct 17 2011 09:48pm
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Oct 17 2011 07:56pm)
thats pretty neat looking imo, but you shoulda erased that thing going off him on the left


Better?
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Oct 17 2011 09:51pm
Quote (TzL @ Oct 17 2011 11:48pm)
Better?
http://www.glamdring.se/users/1a72dd92186fe96d8e64efefff32accc/Rrainbboo.png


the angle looks a little weird on that spot but yeah its better
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Oct 17 2011 09:52pm
Quote (TzL @ Oct 17 2011 09:48pm)
Better?
http://www.glamdring.se/users/1a72dd92186fe96d8e64efefff32accc/Rrainbboo.png


Sweet o_o

Id rather the border was one solid color though.
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Oct 17 2011 10:55pm
Quote (TzL @ Oct 18 2011 03:48am)
Better?
http://www.glamdring.se/users/1a72dd92186fe96d8e64efefff32accc/Rrainbboo.png


I love the colors
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Oct 18 2011 09:35am
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Oct 18 2011 05:51am)
the angle looks a little weird on that spot but yeah its better

Yea, I saw that to, but it kind of looked like that even one the first one.. But its just practice anyway :wub:
Quote (Xandriia @ Oct 18 2011 05:52am)
Sweet o_o

Id rather the border was one solid color though.

I think the border worked actually, but yes a solid color would prolly look better. thanx you <3 / or no border at all ^^
Quote (DB_odin @ Oct 18 2011 06:55am)
I love the colors

I was actually thinking of gifting this to you, cuz when I look at your profile and see what ive gifted u before I feel rather ashamed :(
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Oct 18 2011 12:46pm
Wow this almost makes me want to open photoshop. Good stuff.
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