those c4d's are disturbing the flow.
The lights doesnt fit everywhere (always look @ the render and see where the lightsource has to come from)
I also think that render position isnt well choiced, i'd keep it bigger.
You need to use more layers of filters or sth. to create a better color harmony.
last: i'd try to use more then just "2 Layer" (not meaning the amount of layers from your psd). The concept would be better if you'd use Background (your smudging stuff) middle Part (the focal) and a foreground (example some more smudging) i think this would create a better dynamic.

thats pretty neat looking imo, but you shoulda erased that thing going off him on the left

Yea. I might do, or just smudge it over.
Thx

Better?

the angle looks a little weird on that spot but yeah its better

I love the colors

Yea, I saw that to, but it kind of looked like that even one the first one.. But its just practice anyway

I think the border worked actually, but yes a solid color would prolly look better. thanx you / or no border at all ^^

I was actually thinking of gifting this to you, cuz when I look at your profile and see what ive gifted u before I feel rather ashamed

Wow this almost makes me want to open photoshop. Good stuff.