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Mar 7 2023 12:56pm
Quote (ConDiTioNaL @ 7 Mar 2023 19:52)
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Thank you very much.

3 "recent" sigs I've done that I'm looking for some cnc for.



The pink circle with the R looks out of place. Should I remove it entirely or move it somewhere else?



Thought the colours look off, I'm not sure the blue orb fits here.



This was a gift so in my mind there is nothing wrong with it. Still open for cnc though.

Looking at the sigs I've posted here it doesn't really look like I've improved at all :lol:
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Mar 7 2023 01:15pm
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https://i.imgur.com/uDN55JW.png

Thought the colours look off, I'm not sure the blue orb fits here.
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This is my fav so far.

The orb is not bad but does draw my eye to it away from the girl. I think it fits just need to play with the colour of it and maybe lighting of it. But I don't k know anything just like art

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Mar 7 2023 07:54pm
Quote (rinirax @ Mar 7 2023 01:56pm)
Thank you very much.

3 "recent" sigs I've done that I'm looking for some cnc for.

https://i.imgur.com/dDM61gl.png

The pink circle with the R looks out of place. Should I remove it entirely or move it somewhere else?

https://i.imgur.com/uDN55JW.png

Thought the colours look off, I'm not sure the blue orb fits here.

https://i.imgur.com/w8Nz1Fd.png

This was a gift so in my mind there is nothing wrong with it. Still open for cnc though.

Looking at the sigs I've posted here it doesn't really look like I've improved at all :lol:


Vertical lines in second are distracting, prob go without effect on left border, blue orb fine but prob looks nicer close to the hand with some effects over and play up blue light hitting the render perhaps
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Mar 8 2023 02:48am
Quote (CrazyIz @ 7 Mar 2023 20:15)


Thank you very much :love:

Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ 8 Mar 2023 02:54)
Vertical lines in second are distracting, prob go without effect on left border, blue orb fine but prob looks nicer close to the hand with some effects over and play up blue light hitting the render perhaps


Thank you for the cnc.
I did a quick revision with your feedback in mind and it definitely looks better with the orb closer to her hand and more blue lighting. I already put a ton of blue soft brush on it and the render but it probably got lost in the sea of lens filters and color corrections I added in the end, so I added some more.
Its probably still not enough but the light is a little more noticable now.
I was kinda on the fence about removing the lines, in my mind they really complimented the flow and now it has a lot of empty space on the left. It puts a lot more focus on the render though which is always good.
In 400x150 however it looks way better without the stuff on the left.



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Mar 8 2023 08:29am
dramatic atmospheric lighting with high contrast would elevate it but I still think you would have to push the work a little more than what it is now.
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