o i thout he ment spelled wrong lol my bad

and ya i had to google japenese name meanings etc and last name meanings

but i rlly dont see whats wrong with the shoulder or i would fix it

the shoulder is leaning forward
should be backward

just try to position your arm backward like on your sketch while having your shoulder forward like that, doesnt make sense

ok better? i tried lowering the shoulder and the arm to make it more natural

that's at least anatomically possible, however, it's still extremely awkward positioning. try to do what she's doing with her right arm in real life - be sure to turn your palm out all the way like she's doing, so you can understand what we're talking about.

now, look at the position of her neck relative to her torso

ill give it one more crack lol then its scrap

ok so i sorta lost interest in that atm maby ill go back and fix it layter anyway keep on chugging right



what ya think opinions?

ima try and paint this to if anyone wants to also paint this contact me

bump

Why are you bumping it o.o

because i made that post last night but no one commented on it so i bumpt it

There aren't that many posts here, it'll stay on the first page for over a week so you don't need to