Personally, I would've put the right eye where the intersection is. Also, like I said, made the render bigger.

Thanks for the tips! I'll keep that in mind next time. And yes I really need to work on my typo

Newest One I made for myself using a new tutorial



Notes on this one.

I tried some typography stuff i learned. I think it turned out better then most of my typo but it could definitely still use work.

The sides of the tag got too dark and I don't really like the way they ended up looking

Colors are much too monotone. It's something i really need to work on, because most of my tags are that way.

This post was edited by Woodhouse on Nov 20 2012 11:25pm

stop using that stupid border plz
also, what is that?
its too dark, and can't really make out any of the effects
i mean you covered some of the stuff that's wrong yourself
next time, pick a better render too

Do you suggest no border at all or one all the way around?

Yea i need to go back and brighten it up a bit I just found it hard to do without hating the way it looked.

And I looked for a robot render but I couldn't find any i really liked. I hate planetrenders.. Got any other suggestions?

render yourself
there's a lot of reasources on gfx forums too

I guess I'll have to practice rendering then haha.

Something different. Currently a WIP

As mentioned earlier, border doesn't look nice at all, ever.
I think it's too dark and plain, but it's a wip I guess.