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Jun 9 2012 03:52pm
and this is what this forum has become

@ topic... it sucks. read tuts etc.

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Quote (DB_odin @ Jun 9 2012 05:52pm)
and this is what this forum has become

@ topic... it sucks. read tuts etc.


i miss you

This post was edited by AbDuCt on Jun 9 2012 04:17pm
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At what exactly? His sig actually shows origniality like most peoples here as to where yours is a what 6 stocks images over a solid bg with what looks to be done in paint, no depth in the skulls behind your main stock making it pull away from there. If you would like to actually get some hints and tips yourself, maybe you should check out gfxforum.net and see what some freelancers can teach you. Hell you didn't even blend your stocks in with the bg you can tell its one on top the other.

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj102/rbrodbeck86/assassinscreed3png.png

Do you see how blur creates depth? Every sig should should lure you into your focal point.



I had no idea, please.

Tell me more.
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Quote (AbDuCt @ Jun 9 2012 05:18pm)
1) centered focal i lolled
2) blur creates lq depth
3) learn to use dark and light to create depth along with sharpen to make hq depth
4) that tag looks like a stock with minor smudging and color adjustments
5) text is horrible. it should complement your piece not draw attention away from your focal.

now onto your current sig.

1) centered focal
2) bad distracting text
3) horrid smudging that creates no flow or depth
4) bad colors and your exposure and saturation levels are fucked


maybe you should take a gander at d2jsp's tutorial thread to see what some randoms can teach you

http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=62937532&f=105

also take a look at db odins tutorial. seriously i suggest you should...


One I got beyond making those little japenese sigs there with some c4d and horrible brush strucks that you yourself looked like you smudged in a half circle. You think your ]lighting is creating depth when really it pulled me to the outline of your focal which btw is centered as well. And either your overlay masks of white, or shitty lens for lighting doesn't do it justice, your picture looking digitized with your smudging looks pastel is horrible as well. Sorry I don't take tutorials from people on game sites. And also if you played any of the assasins creed you would know the game has a whole grunge feel about it.

[EDIT]* Btw this thread was for cNc on izzys new sig, so instead of sitting here and spamming peoples opnion why don't you give him a rating and get back to the original topic

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One I got beyond making those little japenese sigs there with some c4d and horrible brush strucks that you yourself looked like you smudged in a half circle. You think your ]lighting is creating depth when really it pulled me to the outline of your focal which btw is centered as well. And either your overlay masks of white, or shitty lens for lighting doesn't do it justice, your picture looking digitized with your smudging looks pastel is horrible as well. Sorry I don't take tutorials from people on game sites. And also if you played any of the assasins creed you would know the game has a whole grunge feel about it.

[EDIT]* Btw this thread was for cNc on izzys new sig, so instead of sitting here and spamming peoples opnion why don't you give him a rating and get back to the original topic


You're the one who started to go off topic and start critiquing other people's tags...
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Quote (slynero @ Jun 9 2012 08:11pm)
One I got beyond making those little japenese sigs there with some c4d and horrible brush strucks that you yourself looked like you smudged in a half circle. You think your ]lighting is creating depth when really it pulled me to the outline of your focal which btw is centered as well. And either your overlay masks of white, or shitty lens for lighting doesn't do it justice, your picture looking digitized with your smudging looks pastel is horrible as well. Sorry I don't take tutorials from people on game sites. And also if you played any of the assasins creed you would know the game has a whole grunge feel about it.

[EDIT]* Btw this thread was for cNc on izzys new sig, so instead of sitting here and spamming peoples opnion why don't you give him a rating and get back to the original topic


You brought up other peoples tags first FAG, dont pussy out..

Maybe you should just kick up your contrast a bit more, I can still see 250 colors in it... I wanna see 30 tops.
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Jun 9 2012 06:59pm
http://gfxforum.net/forumdisplay.php?f=43

WOW...


I have learned so much, please forgive us simpletons.
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Quote (slynero @ Jun 9 2012 08:11pm)
One I got beyond making those little japenese sigs there with some c4d and horrible brush strucks that you yourself looked like you smudged in a half circle. You think your ]lighting is creating depth when really it pulled me to the outline of your focal which btw is centered as well. And either your overlay masks of white, or shitty lens for lighting doesn't do it justice, your picture looking digitized with your smudging looks pastel is horrible as well. Sorry I don't take tutorials from people on game sites. And also if you played any of the assasins creed you would know the game has a whole grunge feel about it.

[EDIT]* Btw this thread was for cNc on izzys new sig, so instead of sitting here and spamming peoples opnion why don't you give him a rating and get back to the original topic


good thing i didnt make this lol.

also id like to see where the focal is centered. if you knew the rule of thirds you would understand that the focal points (the points in which the thirds intersect) hold best impact are are more visually appealing if adjusted to a slightly off focal area.



and maybe you shouldnt of gone "beyond" anime tags because your currents are teribad

e/ also gave him a rating. i told him it was the best on jsp, i think you must of skipped over it since you got all defensive when i critiqued your bad work lol.

e2/ whats a strucks?

This post was edited by AbDuCt on Jun 9 2012 07:11pm
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Jun 9 2012 07:47pm
Quote (FloraFreak @ Jun 10 2012 11:59am)
http://gfxforum.net/forumdisplay.php?f=43

WOW...


I have learned so much, please forgive us simpletons.


Saw the banner.

NOPE.
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