i fucking hate how the gun/hand are disrupting the flow. shoulda made them c4ds go the other way

colors are a bit dull, and more detail on the right maybe too.
but overall really nice. i like how you didnt add text to this one. i liek where this is going.
oh yeah damn this one is not too bad either, but it seems kind of messy - like you arbitrarily duplicated the c4ds in a way they worked.
doesnt look like topaz at all to me