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May 3 2011 02:14pm
Agree with Bene it looks nice. Should vexel the bg sometime to go with it but it's a great piece like it is. Did you add the fog on the water after or was that in the picture? The fog on the right seems really dense and keeps drawing my eye away from the face for some reason.
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May 3 2011 02:27pm
Quote (Bene @ May 3 2011 10:12pm)
This looks awesome, i love the concept.

E: The left hole in her face needs some contrast imo, put something slightly darker bihind it :)


Ill do that, thank you :)

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Agree with Bene it looks nice. Should vexel the bg sometime to go with it but it's a great piece like it is. Did you add the fog on the water after or was that in the picture? The fog on the right seems really dense and keeps drawing my eye away from the face for some reason.


I added the fog, so I can easily tone it down a bit. Thank you!
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May 4 2011 08:26am
fog toned down and that spot behind the face darkened



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May 4 2011 08:42am
I like this! are you going to finish the vexel though?
i'm not a fan of centered focals, but somehow it works here imo.
the fog on the right could be tuned town too.

This post was edited by HydraManteli on May 4 2011 08:42am
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May 4 2011 12:05pm
Quote (HydraManteli @ May 4 2011 04:42pm)
I like this! are you going to finish the vexel though?
i'm not a fan of centered focals, but somehow it works here imo.
the fog on the right could be tuned town too.


by finish the vexel do you mean vexel the background?

I've already tuned down the fog on the right, but I suppose it could use a bit more

meny tanks!
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May 4 2011 12:10pm
I mean do you finish the face. I'd love to see it complete.
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May 4 2011 12:12pm
Quote (HydraManteli @ May 4 2011 08:10pm)
I mean do you finish the face. I'd love to see it complete.


It is complete per say, its intended to be abstract and surreal

the shape was intentional ^^
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