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Nov 30 2012 07:37pm
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Nov 30 2012 08:57pm
Still not giving any foreground.

Don't like the spiderman one at all.
Multiple harsh light sources yet most of his body is dark, no flow.
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Dec 1 2012 09:34am
Quote (sicklad @ Nov 30 2012 10:57pm)
Still not giving any foreground.

Don't like the spiderman one at all.
Multiple harsh light sources yet most of his body is dark, no flow.


no flow on the iron man one?
Spiderman one is lacking
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#194
Dec 1 2012 09:59am
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Nov 30 2012 09:37pm)
http://i1302.photobucket.com/albums/ag139/Lwe12345/ironman2.png


interadesting

lotta potential
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#195
Dec 1 2012 10:05am
Quote (TheShattered @ Dec 1 2012 11:59am)
interadesting

lotta potential


thanks :)

See anything you would improve upon?
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Dec 1 2012 02:11pm
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Dec 1 2012 02:19pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Dec 1 2012 08:11pm)
http://i1302.photobucket.com/albums/ag139/Lwe12345/HazamaSmudge.png


realy weird colors but i realy like th smudging.
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#198
Dec 1 2012 02:41pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ 1 Dec 2012 21:11)
http://i1302.photobucket.com/albums/ag139/Lwe12345/HazamaSmudge.png


The smudging looks quite messy, not a fan of the colors either as it appears rather blurry.
I also think the render could fit in better, it's kind of oversharpened.
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#199
Dec 1 2012 03:11pm
Quote (Zina @ Dec 1 2012 04:41pm)
The smudging looks quite messy, not a fan of the colors either as it appears rather blurry.
I also think the render could fit in better, it's kind of oversharpened.


thanks for the cnc. I modeled after a pochy smudge, and well let's just agree I was aiming a little high. One of one or two other smudges I've done.
I can't really figure out how to get that really clean look

I alternate between 3-18px 91% strength hard brushes
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#200
Dec 1 2012 03:19pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ 1 Dec 2012 22:11)
thanks for the cnc. I modeled after a pochy smudge, and well let's just agree I was aiming a little high. One of one or two other smudges I've done.
I can't really figure out how to get that really clean look

I alternate between 3-18px 91% strength hard brushes


Everything takes practice, just keep on going and happy tagging. :P
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