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Sep 8 2011 09:06pm
Quote (theOHMS @ Sep 8 2011 11:04pm)
http://i53.tinypic.com/91l65d.png
better than my first? :/

is it really stupid that the deus ex is blocked by the eye flare or w.e?
if so i'll remove it tomorrow to see what it's like


yeah i probably wouldnt put it over it, it also puts more weight on the left side like that
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Sep 9 2011 02:23am
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ 8 Sep 2011 07:09)
first thing i really like is the colors and quality is great
texture has a nice feel to it as well
but its a bit chaotic and perhaps overblended
typo is a bit plain compared to the tut as well


yeah i didnt have any sort of futuristic font here just felt like id do a plain simple text on it
and il work on blendin and not making it too chaotic haha
the skin pissed me off it was way too bright xD
thx brah <3
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Sep 9 2011 06:14am
Quote (theOHMS @ Sep 8 2011 07:04pm)
http://i53.tinypic.com/91l65d.png
better than my first? :/

is it really stupid that the deus ex is blocked by the eye flare or w.e?
if so i'll remove it tomorrow to see what it's like


do NOT try to EMULATE tutorials. you want to LEARN from them without recreating them
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Sep 9 2011 01:53pm
Changed background and moved typo closer to the render. I also made the whole a bit brighter.
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Sep 9 2011 01:56pm
Quote (hostamp @ Sep 9 2011 03:53pm)
Changed background and moved typo closer to the render. I also made the whole a bit brighter.
http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/7498/animeq.jpg


Nice change imo
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Sep 9 2011 05:00pm


On the left side cos right side is overrated :rofl:
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Sep 9 2011 05:02pm
Quote (antal14domina @ Sep 9 2011 04:00pm)
http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb444/Antal14/Tutorial2.png

On the left side cos right side is overrated :rofl:


some parts really look LQ and the colour looks really forced with colour overlayed c4ds
also the factals aren't needed
i think you need to do more soft brushing and choose better c4ds

Quote (hostamp @ Sep 9 2011 12:53pm)
Changed background and moved typo closer to the render. I also made the whole a bit brighter.
http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/7498/animeq.jpg


the light source at the ear does not make sense with the lighting on the face
you can soft brush black @ low opacity on another layer clipped to render so you can fix lighting on the render



This post was edited by killkillkillkil on Sep 9 2011 05:04pm
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Sep 9 2011 10:14pm
Prolly gonna try since bored
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Sep 10 2011 01:22am
I've been so busy :(
Have no time for this stuff anything but I will be tracking every week until I do have some time :D
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Sep 10 2011 02:41am
Quote (killkillkillkil @ 10 Sep 2011 01:02)
the light source at the ear does not make sense with the lighting on the face
you can soft brush black @ low opacity on another layer clipped to render so you can fix lighting on the render


That was kinda distracting in fact (as well as not making any sense)


Anyway thanks to all of you for taking your time helping us.
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