You should crop/resize it by like 20-30 px and remove the bottom of it imo.

same haha

love this one

My try for tutorial 1

i liek the render placement, lighting, color, typo, c4d placement a lot, good job there
im not a fan of the background though, it seems a bit too chaotic its like the one weak point of this sig

indeed this isnt bad at all
wouldnt hurt to brighten it up just a tad.

I agree with Magi and Odin.
I dont like text at all, placement is wrong and colors dont match,
Should have put it closer to the focal or made darker colors imo..

The text is almost exactly the same as tutorial? If anything it looks a little too red.

Well.. Text in tut aint awesome either.

better than my first? :/

is it really stupid that the deus ex is blocked by the eye flare or w.e?
if so i'll remove it tomorrow to see what it's like