Looks nice, her right leg looks weird though, compared to your reference
Face could use some fine tuning as well but overall it's good

i c! Ty xD

Im soo bad with coloring this. Any tips?

isn't good

well thats not very constructive feedback now is it?



Coloring shouldnt be your focus until you have a sound understanding of construction and values.

Now this could be just a doodle or whatever but it does expose some weaknesses. Work on methodically drawing a map for your picture in line first so that when you put values down, you can be decisive and fully understand why your adding value somewhere

Now i am going to explain how i can see the flaws so that you can consider them next time. Notice that all of the anatomy on your character is in full frontal view, nothing comes towards the viewer or away from the viewer, except for his left hand. His left hand is showing that you want to bring a peice of that character forward in space but do not understand how to depict something moving in 3d space, onto a 2d canvas. Try experimenting with forshortening, just use your left hand to point at yourself and drawing it, or maybe even read up on perspective.

18x24 Bring King (Lacrosse) Poster painted in Photoshop. Made out of a lacrosse head.

Holy crap dude, where did the time go?
You've improved a lot.

Well belive it or not its done. We do this thing called analytic drawing and were basically all thing infront of you have to be darker and the farther you go it fades away. Thats analitic drawing was in painthings of Rembrant , Cezanne and Freud. Also we dont focus so much on shadows we focus on explaning the surfece of the body. Oh and we don't have to draw genitals and portraits. Oh yes and thanks