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Nov 24 2012 06:40am
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Nov 24 2012 02:59pm)
DUDE NO WAY! tHANKS MAN finally a TRUE complement man honestly i dont care wat people says bout yous guys your all right


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Quote (Lwe12345 @ Nov 19 2012 05:01pm)
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/2620/armyman8.jpg

made some changes


hey this one's cool, try to ease up on the soft brushing a little.

you're still kind of a fag though
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Quote (McFacializer @ Nov 25 2012 04:54pm)
hey this one's cool, try to ease up on the soft brushing a little.

you're still kind of a fag though



you know what..

I'll take it.

Thanks.

:P
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Nov 25 2012 10:01pm
So i gotta say your obviously catching onto how to use photoshop and to mess around with some of its functions. Honestly i wouldnt worry about what people say negatively so much man. Yeah you may feel as if theyre trying to attack you or troll you but your getting the hang of it. Yeah you need some serious principles of art but itll come. Maybe even take a evenings class for art. it'll help you a ton. Keep it up though. Pay less attention to the negative and focus on fixing whatever they may be suggesting. In the end if you like it thats all that matters. Keep it up!
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Quote (GfxMaker101 @ Nov 26 2012 12:01am)
So i gotta say your obviously catching onto how to use photoshop and to mess around with some of its functions. Honestly i wouldnt worry about what people say negatively so much man. Yeah you may feel as if theyre trying to attack you or troll you but your getting the hang of it. Yeah you need some serious principles of art but itll come. Maybe even take a evenings class for art. it'll help you a ton. Keep it up though. Pay less attention to the negative and focus on fixing whatever they may be suggesting. In the end if you like it thats all that matters. Keep it up!


It's refreshing to see some genuineness.
That's great advice, I agree wholeheartedly.
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Nov 26 2012 02:36pm


smudging with nary a tablet
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Nov 26 2012 04:11pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Nov 26 2012 02:36pm)
http://i1302.photobucket.com/albums/ag139/Lwe12345/AbstractSmudgewRENDER2.png

smudging with nary a tablet


mmmmm not sure about this one, it might be the yellow coloring or something. makes it seem fuzzy/soft on the edges between the darkest dark and the yellow?

composition is lacking :S
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Nov 26 2012 04:12pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Nov 26 2012 08:36pm)
http://i1302.photobucket.com/albums/ag139/Lwe12345/AbstractSmudgewRENDER2.png

smudging with nary a tablet


would look better with a dark blue instead of yellow :/
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Quote (UncleMuscles @ Nov 26 2012 06:11pm)
mmmmm not sure about this one, it might be the yellow coloring or something. makes it seem fuzzy/soft on the edges between the darkest dark and the yellow?

composition is lacking :S


:o



I took a break mid way through and came back, might've used a soft brush when I came back on accident

It was done using 91-95% strength, 5-8px hard brush (or soft brush on accident)

as far as composition, what about the composition isnt great? I tried to compose a flow and a decent focal point using a stronger color (originally teal) on the top right
I guess that seems like more of a background, less of an attractive focal


Quote (Golden_star @ Nov 26 2012 06:12pm)
would look better with a dark blue instead of yellow :/


I guess my laptops color is off? the green is meant to be more of a teal, which works a lot better than the yellow+green+purple
ill mess with it a little bit
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