Quote (four420twenty @ Apr 10 2012 11:45pm)
Yeah, its probably a bit wide(should have sized it more with the eyes) plus I drew the teeth too small, cut the gums too short. But live and learn..
It's great that you bought the stuff, it'l help alot. You already know theres alot of problems with the portrait above. Proportions and anatomy is all over the place. Go grab some references, and if you have the cash go grab an anatomy book. Go get a darker pencil, 4B-6B, and use it with your lighter ones. Take note of shading styles you like and emulate them. Most important thing is to pratice as much as possible, though.
Any questions post them here or pm me