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#131
May 26 2013 08:06am
Quote (cu_luu1 @ May 23 2013 10:09pm)
http://i820.photobucket.com/albums/zz125/d2_luu/DSC01028_zps99e69c4f.jpg
finish.


girls face is too wide (again)
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#132
May 26 2013 12:20pm
Such a shame when someone so talented refuses to admit their mistakes. Your shading and rendering are outstanding but your form is awful. You should listen to some of the people in this thread. Most of them know what they're talking about. Especially Odin.

<3 Odin <3
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#133
May 26 2013 02:19pm
Quote (Vivienne @ May 26 2013 10:20am)
Such a shame when someone so talented refuses to admit their mistakes. Your shading and rendering are outstanding but your form is awful. You should listen to some of the people in this thread. Most of them know what they're talking about. Especially Odin.

<3 Odin <3


do you have an e-crush on greg?
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#134
May 27 2013 02:56pm
Quote (CHurley @ May 25 2013 11:41am)
That's a useless comment, and it's not even correct. The proportions seem fine, as tanner pointed out it's the placement that's wrong

Inaga cu1_luu, please take your time next time with the line drawing! It'l make such a difference.. great contrast in that piece



im lazy to draw lines.i want challenge myself little bit. hahaha
Ty.

Quote (Lensherr @ May 26 2013 05:50am)
right side of the girl's face looks kinda fucked, doesn't it?


ye little bit, but it's not a big deal to fix. i had fixed before i ship to her.
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#135
May 27 2013 06:17pm

new drawing.
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#136
May 27 2013 06:35pm
nvm not gonna post here

This post was edited by Karkov on May 27 2013 07:04pm
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#137
May 28 2013 09:19am
Quote (cu_luu1 @ May 27 2013 06:17pm)
http://i820.photobucket.com/albums/zz125/d2_luu/DSC01035_zps19485dc4.jpg
new drawing.


you're already making the same mistakes....

her jaw line doesnt make any sense...

the center of his face is all kinds of fucked up.... look at the angle of his nose and lips, how the hell do they bend like that?

if the guy is turned at a 3/4ths view, the eye farthest away ( his right ) should be smaller and wouldnt extend the same size as the left ( foreshortening )




This post was edited by UncleMuscles on May 28 2013 09:24am
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#138
May 28 2013 01:49pm
[QUOTE=UncleMuscles,May 28 2013 08:19am]you're already making the same mistakes....

her jaw line doesnt make any sense...

the center of his face is all kinds of fucked up.... look at the angle of his nose and lips, how the hell do they bend like that?

if the guy is turned at a 3/4ths view, the eye farthest away ( his right ) should be smaller and wouldnt extend the same size as the left ( foreshortening )



well,i think u see it wrong. he jaw line is rite at the first arrow. idk man. just wait for update.
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#139
May 28 2013 10:25pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ 28 May 2013 08:19)
you're already making the same mistakes....

her jaw line doesnt make any sense...

the center of his face is all kinds of fucked up.... look at the angle of his nose and lips, how the hell do they bend like that?

if the guy is turned at a 3/4ths view, the eye farthest away ( his right ) should be smaller and wouldnt extend the same size as the left ( foreshortening )


http://i.imgur.com/g8uhRVO.png


uncle why bother with this guy, he won't listen. he thinks he's better than everyone.
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#140
May 28 2013 11:59pm
Quote (INaga @ May 28 2013 09:25pm)
uncle why bother with this guy, he won't listen. he thinks he's better than everyone.



it's not true, but i know one thing is true that i love arts like everyone here do.
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