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Mar 20 2013 05:10pm
Quote (TheShattered @ Mar 20 2013 04:20pm)
this


:cry: cnc
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Quote (UncleMuscles @ Mar 20 2013 07:10pm)
:cry:  cnc


its an array of anatomical oddities.

like cu_luu said, arm is off (though this could be said that its a robot arm, and not meant to be an idea fit) and the nose lines up with the side of her lips, so unless shes got a really small mouth or a really big nose.

Also, shes rocking what looks like a michael phelps torso.

it looks like her stomach is facing us, but her chest is cowering into its self away from us.

shes got crazy wide sholders for the left one to hand so low, giving the effect that the right ones length is being hidden because its a straight shot view.

The ribs also agree with the stomach angle, though with the way shes standing we should be able to see her spine more.

the tattoos dont agree with any of the bodys contours which worsen things.

also, not a fan how the hair in the back is fussy enough to stick straight up, but the front takes a right angle dive after the mask. it looks like it should have more volume

The leather straps on her head, look very wrong with no lighting what so ever. and the one that seems to go under her jaw? behind her head? not sure on that one.

would love to be able to see eye lashes, would make the face more real and make us the viewers feel the uncomfortableness of the whole image. as the strap presses against her eye. Also, her ear is pretty strong to not be pressed against her hear with the evidence of a more drastic divit. with the strap right across it and all.

And the lighting on the chin, well.. Jay lenno.

This post was edited by FloraFreak on Mar 20 2013 05:55pm
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Quote (FloraFreak @ Mar 20 2013 05:53pm)
its an array of anatomical oddities.

like cu_luu said, arm is off (though this could be said that its a robot arm, and not meant to be an idea fit) and the nose lines up with the side of her lips, so unless shes got a really small mouth or a really big nose.

Also, shes rocking what looks like a michael phelps torso.

it looks like her stomach is facing us, but her chest is cowering into its self away from us.

shes got crazy wide sholders for the left one to hand so low, giving the effect that the right ones length is being hidden because its a straight shot view.

The ribs also agree with the stomach angle, though with the way shes standing we should be able to see her spine more. 

the tattoos dont agree with any of the bodys contours which worsen things.

also, not a fan how the hair in the back is fussy enough to stick straight up, but the front takes a right angle dive after the mask.  it looks like it should have more volume

The leather straps on her head, look very wrong with no lighting what so ever.  and the one that seems to go under her jaw?  behind her head?  not sure on that one.

would love to be able to see eye lashes, would make the face more real and make us the viewers feel the uncomfortableness of the whole image.  as the strap presses against her eye.  Also, her ear is pretty strong to not be pressed against her hear with the evidence of a more drastic divit. with the strap right across it and all.

And the lighting on the chin,  well..  Jay lenno.


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http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs50/f/2009/331/0/e/0eead18493f64e268ec36f6f7ce5ad9a.jpg


did you not want feedback?

I'm not trying to tear it apart, just what I thought looked odd.

This post was edited by FloraFreak on Mar 20 2013 06:57pm
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Mar 20 2013 07:15pm
Quote (FloraFreak @ Mar 20 2013 06:57pm)
did you not want feedback?

I'm not trying to tear it apart, just what I thought looked odd.


of course I did! thank you for the cnc, I need harsh criticism.

only showed the reference because her pose is odd, but that is why I chose it :P

Oh well on to the next piece ;p

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Quote (UncleMuscles @ Mar 20 2013 09:15pm)
of course I did! thank you for the cnc, I need harsh criticism.

only showed the reference because her pose is odd, but that is why I chose it :P

Oh well on to the next piece ;p


ok

and on a side note, first thought when I saw the reference.

HOLY CRAP, he sure polished this up! .. oh wait.

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most recent work. This is farely bigger, I think around 3' x 2 ' or so?

My senior solo exhibit is April 15th! I will post pictures once everything is framed and displayed, I'm very excited!

Oil on canvas:



This post was edited by UncleMuscles on Apr 3 2013 02:22pm
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Apr 3 2013 04:33pm
looks nb
wish i could go to your x-zibit
would be n1 to make you uncomfortable while you're trying to be formal and shit
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Quote (Toddler @ Apr 3 2013 04:33pm)
looks nb
wish i could go to your x-zibit
would be n1 to make you uncomfortable while you're trying to be formal and shit


debating on slacks + dress shirt and tie, or more casual

either way

ill miss u atom
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slacks/chinos with a neutral buttondown and a cardigan with some allen edmonds or florsheims
dat bitniss cajual.
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