Got mad, so kind of rushed the shit out of this one, but a friend wanted me to show him my outcome if this tut: http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs49/f/2009/186/a/c/Burst_Tag_Tutorial_by_Vasco_gfx.png

I'm thinking of just focusing more on my pentooling...

the last two are the new bests



this one cause flow is finally well done,
color is decent,
render quality is good,
effects decent quality,
a little depth but could be much better,
not chaotic randomness, good composition





interesting pentooling,
colors i'm not sure about, hes redish but there is not really any other red there cept for the 1 circle
text is no good,
the skill level kinda shows with the effect placement, it doesn't make that much sense

if you are interested in doing more pentooling maybe look at TZL threads or maybe look up some tuts/psds using it because you seem like you could do more with it easily

This post was edited by TheReborn_Magi on Jan 13 2013 09:47am

I like every post you make because it's detailed. So thanks for that. Great to see that i'm starting to pick up on some skills. The first one i'd have to give credit to the tut for pretty much walking me through, but it was definitely well-written. As for my pentooling, i actually looked at 4to or something's psd's and he seems to have great pentooling skills and that's what kind of inspired that 2nd one. Will definitely try to improve on pen tooling since i don't see it around much which is a plus for me, a lot more room for style imo.

Decided to work on a bigger canvas and i've actually never been doing that LOL. But i guess having a bigger canvas gives me a bigger imagination.

mehhhh blending on HER right is kinda gross :S

along with the text being small and pretty bad choice... ;/ too much variation in the text

and the yellow orange... why?

Is variation on text a bad thing? I always tried to keep it varied lol. The right side of her, i admit, i didn't do much to it. As for the yellow-orange, i wanted a light source somehow... so bubbles and i wanted some color LOL.

When you make a light source make sure it's a color that matches the rest of your scheme

I thought it matched... oh well. Hopefully my color choices will get better.

Well your color scheme is mostly blue and pink. But then you have two random yellow and orange colors.

You could have tried to use a little orange (although i think blue + pink alone makes for a nice color scheme) but you'd need it blend it in around the tag instead of just having one instance of it