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Nov 11 2012 02:32pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Nov 11 2012 04:29pm)
oh look, so I just so happened to be right about colors. Hmmmmmph...

be done with this one and move on


No got plenty of compliments on the color scheme elsewhere

was that a veiled compliment?
I might just be shocked
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Nov 11 2012 02:48pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Nov 11 2012 02:32pm)
No got plenty of compliments on the color scheme elsewhere

was that a veiled compliment?
I might just be shocked


no, your going to end up overworking a piece and you wont learn anything if you stick to one piece.

oh cool, so i see your one of the usual requetsbaddies.... Only listen to compliments from people that have no idea what there talking about, then when valid critique comes in, you get butthurt and neglect.
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Nov 11 2012 02:50pm
Lwe12345,

I sent you a PM; please consider it, if you have not already known about this.
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Nov 11 2012 02:59pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Nov 11 2012 04:48pm)
no, your going to end up overworking a piece and you wont learn anything if you stick to one piece.

oh cool, so i see your one of the usual requetsbaddies.... Only listen to compliments from people that have no idea what there talking about, then when valid critique comes in, you get butthurt and neglect.


You got me :D


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Nov 11 2012 03:13pm
lovin the analogously colouring bro, nice :D
Also how the space man pops out, looks like he's coming on me :O
and lovely wavy affects man, nice! 9/10
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Nov 11 2012 03:44pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Nov 11 2012 08:34pm)
http://i.imgur.com/A8fs1.jpg

took all your advice, made this sig.

Took me about 8 hours, so hope you like it.

MADE SURE you see the focal point(even added a little bit of guidance in case you couldnt find it)

also, no random colors this time! I chose two, stuck with it. The last sig was made smudging the render, using colors only from that render, but there were just too many! It was so confusing!
picked a render with just 3 colors and I ran with it!

also, i know you hate watermarks, so despite my fear of you all stealing this piece of art I took all the typo off of it! because if it's one thing I know, it's that im just not ready for typo! Instead of continuing to try things so I can get better, i'll just leave it out! that way I'll never have to worry about it.
PLEASE DO NOT RIP!
I think it's an improvement


edit:
also...







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to avoid seeming like i'm being sarcastic or rude, i've put these ellipses.





but real tea, I think the metroid sigs are an improvement over your other stuff.

This post was edited by CHurley on Nov 11 2012 03:45pm
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Nov 11 2012 04:16pm
Quote (TheShattered @ Nov 11 2012 05:13pm)
lovin the analogously colouring bro, nice :D
Also how the space man pops out, looks like he's coming on me :O
and lovely wavy affects man, nice! 9/10


lol
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Nov 11 2012 04:48pm
Quote (TheShattered @ Nov 11 2012 03:13pm)
lovin the analogously colouring bro, nice :D
Also how the space man pops out, looks like he's coming on me :O
and lovely wavy affects man, nice! 9/10


bin
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Nov 11 2012 06:19pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Nov 11 2012 06:48pm)
bin


What would you do if this thread weren't so important to you?
Think of all the art masterpieces you could create if you weren't so busy dealing with us serfs and peasants.
The preservation and integrity of art is on your shoulders oh great one. Don't let this forum get in the way of your immortalization through artistic perfection.
It's not like you're swimming in an ocean of larger fish and don't realize it
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This post was edited by Lwe12345 on Nov 13 2012 09:34pm
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