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Nov 10 2012 10:16pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Nov 10 2012 09:11pm)
take off that watermark...


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Nov 10 2012 10:59pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Nov 10 2012 09:06pm)
http://i.imgur.com/YtvNS.jpg
Perspective
http://i.imgur.com/Wxk6M.jpg
With Light source
http://i.imgur.com/erKTS.jpg
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smudge is pretty bad on this one....

typo is really poorly done.....

random colors.... multiple focals...

This post was edited by UncleMuscles on Nov 10 2012 10:59pm
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Quote (UncleMuscles @ Nov 11 2012 12:59am)
smudge is pretty bad on this one....

typo is really poorly done.....

random colors.... multiple focals...


Thanks....................
Will....... Try way harder........
Seems like I'm......


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Getting worse.........



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Quote (Lwe12345 @ Nov 11 2012 01:23am)
Thanks....................
Will....... Try way harder........
Seems like I'm......


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Getting worse.........



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Nov 11 2012 01:34pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Nov 11 2012 12:59am)
smudge is pretty bad on this one....

typo is really poorly done.....

random colors.... multiple focals...




took all your advice, made this sig.

Took me about 8 hours, so hope you like it.

MADE SURE you see the focal point(even added a little bit of guidance in case you couldnt find it)

also, no random colors this time! I chose two, stuck with it. The last sig was made smudging the render, using colors only from that render, but there were just too many! It was so confusing!
picked a render with just 3 colors and I ran with it!

also, i know you hate watermarks, so despite my fear of you all stealing this piece of art I took all the typo off of it! because if it's one thing I know, it's that im just not ready for typo! Instead of continuing to try things so I can get better, i'll just leave it out! that way I'll never have to worry about it.
PLEASE DO NOT RIP!
I think it's an improvement


edit:
also...







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to avoid seeming like i'm being sarcastic or rude, i've put these ellipses.

This post was edited by Lwe12345 on Nov 11 2012 01:37pm
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Quote (Lwe12345 @ Nov 11 2012 01:34pm)
http://i.imgur.com/A8fs1.jpg

took all your advice, made this sig.

Took me about 8 hours, so hope you like it.

MADE SURE you see the focal point(even added a little bit of guidance in case you couldnt find it)

also, no random colors this time! I chose two, stuck with it. The last sig was made smudging the render, using colors only from that render, but there were just too many! It was so confusing!
picked a render with just 3 colors and I ran with it!

also, i know you hate watermarks, so despite my fear of you all stealing this piece of art I took all the typo off of it! because if it's one thing I know, it's that im just not ready for typo! Instead of continuing to try things so I can get better, i'll just leave it out! that way I'll never have to worry about it.
PLEASE DO NOT RIP!
I think it's an improvement


edit:
also...







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to avoid seeming like i'm being sarcastic or rude, i've put these ellipses.


no need to be mad at me if you dont want to progress

if you cant take critique then visual art isnt for you.

This post was edited by UncleMuscles on Nov 11 2012 01:51pm
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Quote (UncleMuscles @ Nov 11 2012 03:38pm)
no need to be mad at me if you dont want to progress


dont flatter yourself
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Nov 11 2012 02:06pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Nov 11 2012 11:38am)
no need to be mad at me if you dont want to progress

if you cant take critique then visual art isnt for you.


Please critique me i suck
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Nov 11 2012 02:24pm


Edit:

after I posted elsewhere and got some CnC I altered the art and did this


edit2:

too much blur on the render, working on it right now

This post was edited by Lwe12345 on Nov 11 2012 02:32pm
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Nov 11 2012 02:29pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Nov 11 2012 02:24pm)
http://i.imgur.com/OREsI.jpg

Edit:

after I posted elsewhere and got some CnC I altered the art and did this


oh look, so I just so happened to be right about colors. Hmmmmmph...

be done with this one and move on

This post was edited by UncleMuscles on Nov 11 2012 02:30pm
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