Quote (illyria @ 10 Apr 2013 04:10)
Here are two quick attempts at fixing a few mistakes -
http://i.minus.com/ibyqIvesimz453.png
http://i.minus.com/iAlOPPFyNMWLb.png
Going to do another tutorial in a bit.
Tip; when you need a light source, don't just blotch in a white spot where it's supposed to be (the direction is good, albeit a little off), try and use the colours of the image, and try and not just put it somewhere distant from the focal, it draws attention away from it.