Quote (Lwe12345 @ Aug 23 2016 03:51am)
I actually don't like the font at all. It looks pretty uninteresting, especially since it's used for the entire site. Find 2 fonts that really work well together and that fit the feel and style of the company and experiment with styles, kerning, and spacing a bit more. You want it to be functional and concise but also interesting and unique to the company
Also I don't love the logo (if you did that). Is the l intentionally touching the bottom of the e?
Also that bright red with black font background is a Nono. Find 2 or 3 theme colors and use those for the various buttons, link hovers, etc. I like to not use any 100% colors other than white, and I especially don't really ever use 100% black. Black feels unnatural, I've found
Myself sort of turned off by deep black in design and I think it's most likely because that deep of black isn't really ever found in normal every day life. I like to think people are drawn to design that pulls inspiration from nature and the things around us, pure black just feels unnatural. I like a dark grey much more 👍
Also what Eric said about the font on the front page flyer is totally true.
Thank you heaps for the feedback, the logo was done by me, my tutor hated it, and yeah i do see why, the touching letters was me trying to be "different", turns out different doesn't always mean good
I also understand what you mean with solid colors, with my current project i was using solid colours and felt they are sore on the eyes, and kinda hard to work with other colours.
Quote (ericswanson_19 @ Aug 23 2016 03:39am)
It needs more details to make the website look more legit, even if they aren't functional, such as the 'sign in' and 'join' buttons, as well as a more detailed footer. Also, add some space between the very bottom of the page and the footer contents. Add some negative space.
I personally think the font choices for asos are pretty terrible. So many variations, plus the main heading font used for 'This is ASOS' as well as other headings is so bad. Your usage of one font looks better and is more cohesive, but you might try introducing one other font for contrast.
The text on your banner needs completely redone. It's not legible at all with the white text on that background, even with the black drop shadow. Change the left/right arrows on to look different, because the gray looks muddy.
Fix the text of some of the shirt names, because they're extending too far in the other columns.
Consider using subtle red accents in places if you plan on using it to highlight which page you're on in the main navigation. It would help headings pop too, or at least bold some things.
Great job learning the functionality of everything, but the design side needs some refinement.
Yeah i'm not actually to sure why i left the slider text like that.. I couldn't imagine i ever thought that looked right, maybe it was unsaved work (I really hope i didn't submit with that)
I guess i never really tried working with more than one font (if i recall) i'll try that out aswell
I'll start posting mocks up before building the site, so i can get some feedback
Thanks a lot guys for the feedback
much appreciated