Quote (Mezandriia @ 10 Aug 2015 12:13)
Focal looks too blurred, you should try and sharpen that up a bit. I like the colors but it feels like there's too much empty space on the left.
Render placement in the middle of signature... no flow or lighting. Should probably try to work on those things first. Random c4d bubbles not helping it either.
Lol this was friends work, 1st signature he ever made himself lol, i think its pretty decent for the first work