Here is another one without text, I tried using some c4ds
Thoughts on this one? I personally like how this turned out


Edit: added another version with some random border


This post was edited by Aranx on Sep 26 2014 07:53am

Thing to the right is random.
Also focal is messed up.

This post was edited by teazle on Sep 26 2014 02:12pm

Can you please further expain what you mean with your post so I can understand what you mean?

The main point that your eyes are attracted to is the bright light and the c4d, they're also in the thirds spot.

Oh okay, will think of that for the next signature, makes perfect sense

Focal is the point where the eyes are drawn. If you did'nt know that you should read some beginner tutorials.
Also c4d to the right is out of place. Should be removed to improve the compo.

Pretty neat for a first..

Yep, looks like the C4D was slapped on there now that you mention it, thanks for that
I'll work on the focal for the next sig, thanks again sir!



Thanks for your input John

My most recent tag, tried something new


thoughts?

Following tuts at all? If so link the tutorials