Thanks guys i hope to post some more good ones soon of different styles.

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thoughts?

This post was edited by Thricer on Apr 9 2014 02:36am

Not bad. Again, the text is something you need to work on imo. It doesn't fit in. I understand that you're trying to ensure that it doesn't become the focus, but it also has to be readable. Because honestly, I have no idea what it says.

I think the blast attack thingy is the center of the sig again. Going back to blurring, I would have blurred that, to focus attention on the actual character.

The latter criticism is more personal and style based. But text is something you need to work on in general (based on your two signature).

Better?

more cnc on this pls

such middle
much focal

Make his arms, legs, and a bit of his chest less focal to the signature. You can use multiple techniques; the choice is up to you. Blurring likely being the easiest route.

Another thing that just struck me is that the color of the render/crop doesn't fit well with the overall color of the background. Either make the render the color of the background, or the background the color of the render (or at least the non-focal parts)