Dunno if its terrible lol.

it looks good to me, only issue is the right side goes to black instantly which could be better like on the left

I tried to add some text, but i didnt like it with it on, lmk what you think, dunno about this style, was using some pen tool, and i've only been using it for like 5 times

She looks like a smurf :/

The render is not blended enough, and according to where the girl looks, she should be placed on the left. We, North Americans, read from left to right, so we would see the main focal 1st and then the rest of the signature, for a bigger impact. But overall, it looks decent ! Keep working !

This post was edited by Access on Apr 13 2014 10:54pm

That isn't true, just depends on the composition for placement

something very eye-catching in this one.
the light source seems off, as if its not distinct. If you look at the render the light floods over her right shoulder onto her breasts.