Don't like it, the quality is really poor along with colors (monotone), it is also chaotic and lacks any flow
the outer border doesn't fit in (color and idea-wise), if you want your text to stick outside of the signature, you can create a new psd file with a transparent background and slap the signature on there and then use a text layer for the pop-out text. Working with any blending options is a killer for signatures (bevel/emboss, outer/inner glow etc.)
I would highly recommend avoiding typography at this stage, it is very difficult to master and could destroy a good composition
I do however like the theme, since I'm a GoT fan
Post #2 has some very decent tutorials for beginners
If you plan on doing this for yourself only without interest in knowing what others think about your work, then disregard this post, but if you are looking for improvement - then any cnc (harsh or not) from people who have been around here for a long time is really worth considering
This post was edited by Awer on Jun 20 2013 03:26pm