Quote (INaga @ Feb 22 2013 05:57pm)
i still need to learn T.T can someone put all flaws in this signature in one post?
Blending is nonexistent- I.E. Color choice is bad. Hard lines in the C4D to render. A soft edge eraser wont fix everything. Smudging and other kinds of blending effects are your friend. Also, his shirt is white, but the rest of the tag is dark... Thats a no no.
The white circles show places where the blending is hard-stopped and the effect changes immediately. No bueno, mi amigo.
Flow is also no there. This render has good potential for flow, but wasnt utilized correctly. If the render is going "///" then the background effects should be going "///" as well. Like I said before, here is its Render: "///" BG Effects "?/??\?|/|?\?|?}/\?}?{/|?\/}Dafuq?/?\/}]/[/[//|?
The white lines represent your flow, and lackthereof.
Light source... A light source is exactly what it sounds like... A source of light. There isnt one here. Your light stems from multiple directions. Normally a soft 200px white brush is used to establish one of these on a new layer set to softlight, but sometimes it establishes itself and looks decent. This one however, did not establish one. Henceforth, no decency.
The circles represent all of the possible light sources (besides his face. Never put a light source on a focal point.) Only one should be used, and it should be stronger than these, but not overwhelming the tags focal.
Hope that helped.
Edit; better lightsource example.
This post was edited by TortoiseBox on Feb 22 2013 06:26pm