idc i figured if he talked shit on dead family members on a post im asking for pricing not any1s opinion and definetly not talkin shit and making bad jokes about dead people.

So il put a harmless comment here. Kids a dick.

Could you maybe draw me a quick mock-up of where you would close it off? I've tried a couple things, but I'm losing the letterforms in the process.

pls go, mad

refer to my post i edited it.

the thing about these simple logos is you have to keep it organic with curves and keep it contained in a simple geometry which you already have yet make it as objective as you can.

This post was edited by Sena on Feb 22 2013 11:52am

He asked for opinions i Gave it. Did nothing wrong U da mad 1

Thanks I'll see what I turn out by changing the thickness of the letterforms.
Also, UncleMuscles, sent you a PM with a slight change.

It looks unbalanced to me now. I get what you mean by activating the negative space, but I enjoyed how the spaces between the letters measured equally in thickness to the letters themselves.
Maybe I can find a different way to toy with the negative space - I'll keep working.

that corner within the S curve still bothers me ><

Now?