v2 > all

v2 ribbon is hot

There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes in the v2 does that matter?

It matters, but i can't see them i'm dyslexic, will have to get the girlfriend to spellcheck.

Is the copy shit or not shit?









lol ye cheers
idunno, either selling for $1.99 or $2.99 not too sure yet.



sweet

ran it through the girlfriend spellcheck.

also what do you think of purple?

I love one-pagers! It looks great the way it is, but did you try having the headline be super large text?

cheers

hrmm not sure, you don't think that it will impact on the relative scale of related elements?

also feels like too many elements are floating right, you needs more "calls to action" to get the app, maybe include the word "download" or "get it now" in the footer, and i feel like you could swap around the elements in the body sort that out a bit, maybe?

yeah i think I can do something with the 3 promo screenshots & copy that is a bit more dynamic / glued to the page, i just want to avoid adding more vertical lines tho. have you seen websites that do this well?
I think 2 is a good number of CTA's, but yeah i might have to put some kind of command copy in the footer

the blue was better