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#11
Jan 23 2013 08:02am
Quote (Xandriia @ Jan 23 2013 03:53am)
J/w, why?

Also hate the hollow font, it hurts my eyes. And is the word mouthfeel a coffee thing? I cant say Ive ever hated a word before, but I just might now.


you can give me some mouthfeel

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#12
Jan 23 2013 08:05am
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Jan 23 2013 10:02am)
you can give me some mouthfeel

http://i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/430/609/3d9.png


magi pls
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#13
Jan 23 2013 08:06am
Quote (TheShattered @ Jan 23 2013 10:05am)
magi pls


loololol
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#14
Jan 23 2013 08:06am
Mouthfeel is a culinary term, and is used quite often.

However, i don't hear it much outside of work.


Its used all the time for my cheese tastings, and there is little other way to convey how shit feels in your mouth.


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#15
Jan 23 2013 09:34am
Quote (Sugu @ Jan 23 2013 03:20am)
Gah my eyes @ hollowed

You need to move a few things around and change a few fonts on some of the headers

Try not centering the menu items because you has bullets on the items and you're not keeping it aligned it really throws the eye off

Also think the black box should be on the left not the right


yessss

thank you so much

I made the font plain after the overwhelming response :P
will mess around with the rest later.

Seriously thanks guys
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#16
Jan 23 2013 09:45am
the thin white line around the gray box annoys me, thicken it up to the same as the orange boarder in V2


and get rid of the orange boarder in V1 orange on orange?
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#17
Jan 23 2013 04:42pm
Top colors look a lot better

I like the vector stuff
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#18
Jan 23 2013 05:01pm



let me know if it was an improvement
spaced out all the text, tried to arrange it so it is a little easier to read
tried to make the borders less harsh and more organized
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#19
Jan 23 2013 05:44pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Jan 23 2013 06:01pm)
http://i1302.photobucket.com/albums/ag139/Lwe12345/CoffeeBagStickerV5_zps586f209c.png


let me know if it was an improvement
spaced out all the text, tried to arrange it so it is a little easier to read
tried to make the borders less harsh and more organized


TONS BETTER
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Jan 23 2013 05:46pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Jan 23 2013 07:01pm)
http://i1302.photobucket.com/albums/ag139/Lwe12345/CoffeeBagStickerV5_zps586f209c.png


let me know if it was an improvement
spaced out all the text, tried to arrange it so it is a little easier to read
tried to make the borders less harsh and more organized


that's the stuff m8
good sh1et
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