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Aug 12 2012 09:48am
Quote (Aishan @ Aug 12 2012 07:11am)
Another portrair attempt

http://s13.postimage.org/drj9rdcpz/Lana_22.jpg


forehead seems to protrude to far out. same with the hair on that side. the hairline doesnt grow that far onto the forehead.

nose seems long and too smooth.

the face is in a profile shot, but the eye is drawn in a 3/4th view.


neck/shoulder seem very long
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Aug 12 2012 04:40pm
Quote (Aishan @ Aug 12 2012 07:11am)
Another portrair attempt

http://s13.postimage.org/drj9rdcpz/Lana_22.jpg


way to much forehead, hair has no tones and looks rushed. Nose is far to pointy
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Aug 12 2012 06:52pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Aug 12 2012 09:48am)
forehead seems to protrude to far out. same with the hair on that side. the hairline doesnt grow that far onto the forehead.

nose seems long and too smooth. 

the face is in a profile shot, but the eye is drawn in a 3/4th view.


neck/shoulder seem very long


Quote (DB_odin @ Aug 12 2012 04:40pm)
way to much forehead, hair has no tones and looks rushed. Nose is far to pointy


How you know reference wasn't just ugly?
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#14
Aug 13 2012 02:55am
keep working at it
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