Try removing the three white stripes on the left and desharpening the sides, particularly the right

This post was edited by domthepom on Jun 26 2012 02:16am

green arrow is a bright personality so i guessed it incroprate that into the signature

without stripes. and non sharpened bg.

This post was edited by Golden_star on Jun 26 2012 10:09am

all i am seeing is a render getting slapped over a bg/c4d with distracting lines with excess lighting and you sharpened everything...

read tuts.

white is too distracting
border- get rid of it
too many star stocks
soft brushing by text is out of place
text itself is out of place

best to just restart and try a new tut, spending time on one sig can only do so much. Its about trying new techniques and new styles

Looking good. Keep trying new things.

Sounds like someone is jealous..

Golden these images are incredibly well made. Ignore the haters; their presence just proves that if you get too good at something, someone will come along to try and cut you down.

oh lord he made a multi

not only they type the same but this one suddenly only attacks me and not the rest...

This post was edited by Irresistable on Jun 27 2012 07:23pm

You wish.. if that was the case then you wouldn't look so stupid. However that's not the case so you continue to embarrass yourself. ;/

I'm not a multi of any account; attempt to prove me wrong.