i was in defence mode i dont think anyone likes to be called a tracer if thay are in some sort of art work

and ya i will work on the larger brush thing but how much larger like twice as big idk

how on earth are you planning on coloring that thing? it looks really flat
your final sketch looks like it was pen tool'd with

i ushed the brush tool after that i whent over it with the pen tool

and if you paint over it i dont think it will look flat lol

i would like to see the colored version (or bw shadowed)

atm im sketching out mountains and a forest then ill shadow / paint it

i never painted befor so ill see how that goes

thats not the only thing in this thread with no shape or form.....zing!

well isnt all sketches flat untill you shade them / paint them

i think this will look 100% better once i do so i just gota figure out how to do it

no not at all, plenty of things can indicate depth without adding any shading or color

heres an example of a dragon in line art that has forms


its not perfect but heres some things that guy is doing that you arent that is making his dimensional and yours flat

-his scales follow the forms they rest on. They wrap around his head or neck or tail for example. Your scales are a flat texture slapped on top that doesnt change.

-his posing is 3/4 while yours is strict profile, limbs come forward and backward in space indicating depth while yours is straight on

-his lines indicate shapes, they form rhythms, and straights vs curves. This is shape design and it is more advanced but huge. Take a look at your back calf for example, its like a bubble on his leg, the shape is this (), for it to be a rhythm, you must offset it. Or a straight vs curve is appealing which is like |)


hope that helps

and btw art classes in high school and art classes in general dont teach much unless you have the right teacher (which is super rare)