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May 3 2012 03:32pm
Quote (AngeloMisery @ May 3 2012 09:25pm)
Cnc, has no redeeming qualities. There is no foundation here, it is literally a render on a background, plus the drop shadow looks awful should I continue?

I will follow the wise old words and say read at least ONE tutorial before posting here.


this was taken from a begginers tut, please stay small and off my topic ;)
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May 3 2012 03:34pm
Quote (Golden_star @ May 3 2012 04:32pm)
this was taken from a begginers tut, please stay small and off my topic ;)


You asked for it, please show me where anything I said was wrong. Is a render on a shape with a gradiant fill and a drop shadow, looks bad. Please continue to read tutorials and actually make a sig :) .

Sorry if my critique is harsh I just find it odd that you ask for critique and then when you don't like it get angry.


Quote (CHurley @ May 3 2012 04:38pm)
Just stick with doing some tutorials. Ask some of the sig guys around here for some better tutorials! If it's your first sig well done. Don't forget to read the book of atomespy when ever you get a chance too.


What he said is better and much more correct .

This post was edited by AngeloMisery on May 3 2012 03:40pm
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May 3 2012 03:38pm
Quote (Golden_star @ May 3 2012 10:32pm)
this was taken from a begginers tut, please stay small and off my topic ;)


Just stick with doing some tutorials. Ask some of the sig guys around here for some better tutorials! If it's your first sig well done. Don't forget to read the book of atomespy when ever you get a chance too.

This post was edited by CHurley on May 3 2012 03:38pm
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May 3 2012 03:46pm
I would honestly delete that font off your computer. It doesn't even look good on wedding invitations, let alone d2jsp sigs.

Drop shadow is too dark. Try 15-25% ..Also, the background isn't dark enough to make the character pop off it enough. Everything is a muddy, yellow hue.

This post was edited by ericswanson_19 on May 3 2012 03:46pm
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May 3 2012 04:06pm
Quote (AngeloMisery @ May 3 2012 09:34pm)
You asked for it, please show me where  anything I said was wrong. Is a render on a shape with a gradiant fill and a drop shadow, looks bad. Please continue to read tutorials and actually make a sig :) .

Sorry if my critique is harsh I just find it odd that you ask for critique and then when you don't like it get angry.




What he said is better and much more correct .


facepalm.png is not constructive in my books, i realise its not the best, but i ask people to judge by the fact that its my first borderless one.

This post was edited by Golden_star on May 3 2012 04:20pm
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May 3 2012 04:14pm
- Second one a little darker and diffrent font, plus rezised ;)

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May 3 2012 04:49pm
any comments on my latest still looking for some constructive criticism.
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Quote (Golden_star @ May 3 2012 04:49pm)
any comments on my latest still looking for some constructive criticism.


your not going to get c&c for a popout
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May 3 2012 04:57pm
Quote (DB_odin @ May 3 2012 10:51pm)
your not going to get c&c for a popout


c&c :huh:
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May 3 2012 04:57pm
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c&c  :huh:


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