Quote (WhyteLinux @ Apr 19 2012 05:57pm)

Nice, i think for anything game related "a little too detailed" can work well.
However, it reminds me of the 'you wouldn't download a car' at the start of movies

Quote (ericswanson_19 @ Apr 20 2012 12:11pm)

That's what I was think in regards to where it would be used. I'll try a version that isn't so scattered. I had scattered the letters before adding the other design elements. TY

Quote (WhyteLinux @ Apr 19 2012 06:14pm)

Also, i think if you presented alone it at the smaller size with more white space, people might not perceive it as so busy.

Quote (WhyteLinux @ 19 Apr 2012 18:57)

Nice, i think for anything game related "a little too detailed" can work well.
However, it reminds me of the 'you wouldn't download a car' at the start of movies

Quote (ericswanson_19 @ Apr 20 2012 07:34am)

I adjusted the height of the S, A and the 3 X's. I smoothed out and widened the broken pieces of the P and A, so the negative space wasn't so small when shrunken down. I also slightly smoothed out the remaining sharp edges in the X's. I think it's looking much better. TY, white!

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/2649/spanxxxylogo.jpg

Quote (ericswanson_19 @ Apr 21 2012 01:34am)

I adjusted the height of the S, A and the 3 X's. I smoothed out and widened the broken pieces of the P and A, so the negative space wasn't so small when shrunken down. I also slightly smoothed out the remaining sharp edges in the X's. I think it's looking much better. TY, white!

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/2649/spanxxxylogo.jpg

Quote (WhyteLinux @ Apr 20 2012 07:55am)

much better, but the cap/apex of the A & P seem strange to me.

Quote (ericswanson_19 @ Apr 20 2012 08:13am)

I pushed them out as if the bullet penetration moved them up and angled them. Should I make the pieces smaller so they still line up with the other letters?