i dont understand

Correct me if I'm wrong, but this is what I see. You're not looking UP through the water. You're looking horizontally across the bottom/middle/deep part of the ocean. He's saying there's a rock like structure jutting out of the sand and that's the dark spot which would make sense and the way the fish are behaving and the way they are facing also helps with this idea. Not only that, but even if you where looking up it would still have dark spots like that because of waves/changes in depth.

correct, thank you.

the right side looks great, but the big split in the lighting its driving me nuts.
water makes wierd light source si know, but wouldnt hurt to make it a little birghter

no, not correct.


i at first i thought it sucks. then i looked at it again and i realized what you were going for. now i think only typo sucks - it should enhance the underwater feeling, blend in but still be able to read it clearly

okay, I'll try that. I think I'm gunna make it bigger too, I think that would help the underwater
feel.


yeh I think ill try and get rid of the light sorce on the left, thanks

I kinda agree with this and this



its really empty and the text blows. I like the idea and the underwater light effect doenst look too bad imo. I dont feel these tiny shining eel thingys.
Id love to see some jelly fish or giant seemonster silhoutte like konkari mentioned.

Maybe some roughly noticable textured cliff-silhouttes aswell. Underwater flora. Just tossing ideas at ya m8.

gl

This post was edited by sgtSlotte on Oct 2 2010 03:33am

thanks man

I'm gunna revisit this later today for sure, I'll try and add some things like those thar

lol

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