Hard To Reopen Ps - Topic

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May 30 2010 08:06pm

Quote (roy2000 @ May 30 2010 09:01pm)

I removed the lines and some texture, I think it looks Flat and too Mono, I need to find a good color scheme.
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a323/roy291/vengancecontest5.png

True, i like the lines better..haha. Still better without the halftone pattern though.

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May 30 2010 08:13pm

Quote (nerobellum @ May 31 2010 02:01am)

This is the first tag I have seen from you since.... Since you posted GDGC!

It's got some cool elements, but those weird disc-shapes are an eye sore. Actually, I quite like the face and the general idea, but it needs some better execution.

e: I liked the sheet music

For some reason it looks better without the speakers but empty, I suppose I do have too much neg. space as suggested but on the other hand I hate too much clutter

Quote (Xandriia @ May 31 2010 02:06am)

True, i like the lines better..haha. Still better without the halftone pattern though.

I may try a different pattern or just use texture.

This post was edited by roy2000 on May 30 2010 08:14pm

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May 30 2010 08:16pm

Quote (roy2000 @ May 31 2010 02:13am)

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a323/roy291/vengancecontest6.png

For some reason it looks better without the speakers but empty, I suppose I do have too much neg. space as suggested but on the other hand I hate too much clutter

I may try a different pattern or just use texture.

That looks much better

imo, lose the pokedots but.

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May 30 2010 08:49pm

Really liking the quarter notes and wiggly staff lines 9.5 // 10

Ps. Looks more original without the speakers they don't really fit