Lost my other thread. Will try and not go inactive this time because I want to improve. So I will post everything here. Whether it is good or bad.

10/10/14

so gud

yaw feelin it

Looking forward to following this, please don't let me down op .

Just gonna steal all your tags. IJS.

I dont like the blur, way to much of it.

just sharpen the render and it will be way better

Yeah I tried so many times to get it right, but it's always to little or to much.





It is sharpened..

needs MOAR SHARPEN, i can't realy see a focal point. (the hands are blurry) also i'd work on the compo a little bit. try to move him upwards, if the render allows it