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Jul 19 2014 12:40am
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Silverfall-signature-tutorial-54331213



give me some critique guys

strayed away from the tut a bit with the image and idea but same basic concept



Edit: looking at it now you can tell the dragon and the castle are of 2 different qualities :/

This post was edited by kodyb on Jul 19 2014 12:43am
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Jul 19 2014 08:23am
Imma just keep it short.
*Castle is LQ and out of Place.
*Fire is out of Place.
*Dragon covers pretty much the entire canvas, (big & massive wings = bad).
*Dragon is way to big compared to castle, unless its a toycastle.
*As a whole its oversharpened.
*Its flat.

By out of Place I mean its poorly blended together.
My advise is to keep it simple for now, stay with one focal and read beginner tutorials.
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Jul 19 2014 08:34am
Quote (teazle @ 19 Jul 2014 09:23)
Imma just keep it short.
*Castle is LQ and out of Place.
*Fire is out of Place.
*Dragon covers pretty much the entire canvas, (big & massive wings = bad).
*Dragon is way to big compared to castle, unless its a toycastle.
*As a whole its oversharpened.
*Its flat.

By out of Place I mean its poorly blended together.
My advise is to keep it simple for now, stay with one focal and read beginner tutorials.


thank you. exactly the kind of critique I was looking for
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Jul 19 2014 09:36am
Hey, doesn't look too bad. As Tzl said keep it simple and stick to the tut for now. When you feel you've learned something from the tut, move on. Try to expand into different styles and find what you like. If you post work frequently I'll be sure to track this thread. It's great to see someone who is truly trying to progress.

Here's a sticky for some tuts: http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=63814312&f=246

I haven't looked over them so I can't speak to their quality. One of the regulars has a great list of tuts to keep you busy. Hopefully someone will post it.

This post was edited by Karkov on Jul 19 2014 09:40am
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Jul 19 2014 09:38am
The flames are where they originally are in the render.. I could crop it and move it closer and above his tongue
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Jul 19 2014 09:39am
Quote (Karkov @ 19 Jul 2014 10:36)
Hey, doesn't look too bad. As Tzl said keep it simple and stick to the tut for now. When you feel you've learned something from the tut, move on. Try to expand into different styles and find what you like. If you post work frequently I'll be sure to track this thread. It's great to see someone who is truly trying to progress.


i know i Wil get 2 or 3 done a week as the only time I have to do them is at work.

Thanks for your input :-)
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Jul 21 2014 09:02pm

did not like the way this turned out but i spent time on it so i figured i would post also

used the same tut as the first one

This post was edited by kodyb on Jul 21 2014 09:03pm
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Quote (Arcaeus @ 21 Jul 2014 22:10)
Here are some tuts
I haven't looked through em in awhile but I think there are nice ones in there

E: this is helpful as well
http://zenron.deviantart.com/art/Zenron-s-guide-to-Photoshop-164141102
Click the link in the description


thanks a ton :)
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Jul 24 2014 11:31pm
Quote (kodyb @ Jul 18 2014 11:40pm)
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Silverfall-signature-tutorial-54331213

http://i.imgur.com/mMkUnui.jpg

give me some critique guys

strayed away from the tut a bit with the image and idea but same basic concept



Edit: looking at it now you can tell the dragon and the castle are of 2 different qualities :/

its very bad ass it reminds me of reign of fire when the dragon lands on top of the castle and burns it to dust was a awsome movie
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