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May 12 2014 05:01am
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May 12 2014 05:51am
scrap the border........................
the contrast is crap for a b/w. b/w needs a larger variance in darker blacks and to balance the whites or it just looks washed out like it is
the text being the darkest thing distracts so much, why
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May 12 2014 06:21am
tryed to correct

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May 12 2014 11:21am
My eye's have no idea where to look.

The c4d on the left side looks out of place. The c4d in front of her looks good though.

In addition, I still want the tag darker.

This post was edited by Friedrich on May 12 2014 11:22am
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May 12 2014 01:18pm
But more darken overall, or any specific places that maybe should increase depth?
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May 12 2014 02:37pm
i guess i darkened it abit. lmk what you think of this version, im gonna scrap it soon and move on, but would be cool to get last touch as i kinda like it



This post was edited by Zamm on May 12 2014 02:37pm
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May 13 2014 08:44am
Quote (Zamm @ May 12 2014 04:37pm)
i guess i darkened it abit. lmk what you think of this version, im gonna scrap it soon and move on, but would be cool to get last touch as i kinda like it

http://i61.tinypic.com/vrd082.png


As someone who knows nothing about creating graphics (not much anyway), I'm only giving you this opinion as someone from the outside: You're making progress :) Each one is looking a bit better, so keep it up :)
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May 13 2014 09:42am
Quote (Zamm @ May 12 2014 04:37pm)
i guess i darkened it abit. lmk what you think of this version, im gonna scrap it soon and move on, but would be cool to get last touch as i kinda like it

http://i61.tinypic.com/vrd082.png


Try using the burn tool in certain areas.

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May 13 2014 10:02am
it's not that there's not enough difference between the black and the white, it's that there's an overwhelming presence of contrast that distracts the eye from the focal, most notably on the right half of the tag.

you want to frame your focal in contrast to attract the eye



notice how the focal, the "wanderer" is framed by contrast so that it stands out, and then the ridges in the background lead towards him; the rocks in the foreground as well.

this is one correct example of how to frame your focal in contrast to attract the eye

e: the contrast between the fog and the ridges, again, serves to draw the eye towards the focal

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May 13 2014 10:10am
Quote (Nereaux @ May 13 2014 12:02pm)
it's not that there's not enough difference between the black and the white, it's that there's an overwhelming presence of contrast that distracts the eye from the focal, most notably on the right half of the tag.

you want to frame your focal in contrast to attract the eye

http://payload201.cargocollective.com/1/12/411117/6331073/Caspar_David_Friedrich_032_The_wanderer_above_the_sea_of_fog_o_905.jpg

notice how the focal, the "wanderer" is framed by contrast so that it stands out, and then the ridges in the background lead towards him; the rocks in the foreground as well.

this is one correct example of how to frame your focal in contrast to attract the eye

e: the contrast between the fog and the ridges, again, serves to draw the eye towards the focal


centered focal, fucking amateur
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