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Apr 8 2014 12:57pm
I took some time on this. Would like some good feedback / ideas / tips

None of this non sense that people like toss around here

I decided to start my own progression since i JUST started getting back into it

started feelin my groove again. so ill be posting sigs i make to better myself (not requested unless i feel i really did a good job)



Thanks in advance :)
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Apr 8 2014 01:01pm
i might aswell say it before anyone else does.


stay away from text and borders

dont center focals, learn rule of thirds.

thats all i can say. im newb

This post was edited by MajinVegeta on Apr 8 2014 01:01pm
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Apr 8 2014 01:07pm
Quote (MajinVegeta @ Apr 8 2014 01:01pm)
i might aswell say it before anyone else does.


stay away from text and borders

dont center focals, learn rule of thirds.

thats all i can say. im newb


i was always taught the the focal is the main purpose? if you pull away from the focal

kinda pointless to have one to begin with? might as well make an abstract?

at least thats what i was told. Someone elaborate more on this preference?


also whats wrong with boarders?

This post was edited by Thricer on Apr 8 2014 01:07pm
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i was always taught the the focal is the main purpose? if you pull away from the focal

kinda pointless to have one to begin with? might as well make an abstract?

at least thats what i was told. Someone elaborate more on this preference?


also whats wrong with boarders?


borders are an old fad that sucks
focal should be on a third or close, because it's more pleasing to the eye (also easier to balance compo that way) centered makes it difficult and isn't often executed well
atm that light blob is the focal in your sig and takes all the attention
bg looks cool to me though, but depth is random
text is shitty, only add if it compliments the sig (also consider text just like adding any other effect, needs to be planned and incorporated, not just slapped on w/ a shitty clipping mask over it
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Quote (Arcaeus @ Apr 8 2014 01:13pm)
borders are an old fad that sucks
focal should be on a third or close, because it's more pleasing to the eye (also easier to balance compo that way) centered makes it difficult and isn't often executed well
atm that light blob is the focal in your sig and takes all the attention
bg looks cool to me though, but depth is random
text is shitty, only add if it compliments the sig (also consider text just like adding any other effect, needs to be planned and incorporated, not just slapped on w/ a shitty clipping mask over it


Text isn't there to compliment as much as it is to watermark from stealing. Ik it isn't HUGE but meh i like it.

Yea my depth has always kinda been an issue as far as what to blur what to sharpen etc.

does this look better?



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Apr 8 2014 02:34pm
dont blur everything is one thing
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Apr 8 2014 03:05pm
Quote (Sena @ Apr 8 2014 02:34pm)
dont blur everything is one thing


mmm how do you depict what to blur and what not to blur? and i dont blue everything.
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Apr 8 2014 03:10pm
depends on what youre going for
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Apr 8 2014 07:17pm
Quote (Thricer @ Apr 8 2014 03:16pm)
Text isn't there to compliment as much as it is to watermark from stealing. Ik it isn't HUGE but meh i like it.

Yea my depth has always kinda been an issue as far as what to blur what to sharpen etc.

does this look better?

http://i.imgur.com/pCCkf80.jpg


I really like this tag, the effects are quite cool and the colors are enjoyable, its got a good atmosphere. Not a huge fan of the text but whatever, bottom right is the weakest part
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Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Apr 8 2014 09:17pm)
I really like this tag, the effects are quite cool and the colors are enjoyable, its got a good atmosphere. Not a huge fan of the text but whatever, bottom right is the weakest part


Agreed.
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